I can’t decide whether to congratulate on the language, argue that this was all wonky for no other reason than to drive the reader mad, or to not comment because I probably didn’t get what this was about… so all of them at once I suppose, like a good contradiction.
I really enjoyed this. I love coming across a piece and thinking to myself “there’s no way I could have written something like this.” It speaks to the creative variety and diversity present in humanity.
So clever. So chilling - you had me when the woman was still conscious inside the swan statue and he had to walk away to save himself. You fit a lot into this story and still it’s a smooth, effortless read.
WONDERFUL! I need to read it once more (or maybe twice) to grasp all the facets you have created. It feels to me like a thesis in psychology, alongside “Alice in Wonderland,” and a mirror of the society we live in. Such a beautifully written analysis, where philosophy is interwoven with romanticized details. You are very talented! And thank you for this text.
Absolutely! I did hope the story’s surreal, psychological, and absurd qualities would come through, and I’m glad you noticed the social and philosophical reflections as well.
I can’t decide whether to congratulate on the language, argue that this was all wonky for no other reason than to drive the reader mad, or to not comment because I probably didn’t get what this was about… so all of them at once I suppose, like a good contradiction.
Well done, and I’m amazed by your voice here!
I’ll happily accept all three at once: confusion, contradiction, and congratulations. Thank you so much!
This was absolutely incredible.
One of the most poignant and creative pieces of commentary and personal insight on our society I have read.
Truly, standing ovation.
Thank you so much for reading so closely. It means a great deal to hear that. ☺️
It's an amazing read. Keep writing.
I really enjoyed this. I love coming across a piece and thinking to myself “there’s no way I could have written something like this.” It speaks to the creative variety and diversity present in humanity.
That’s such a generous thing to say. Thank you for reading and sharing it.
This was very creatively written! Loved it! ❤️❤️
This is really kind of you. Thank you for reading it!
So clever. So chilling - you had me when the woman was still conscious inside the swan statue and he had to walk away to save himself. You fit a lot into this story and still it’s a smooth, effortless read.
My first worry was that it might feel too dense or overstuffed, so I’m relieved it flowed. Thank you for your thoughtful words.
WONDERFUL! I need to read it once more (or maybe twice) to grasp all the facets you have created. It feels to me like a thesis in psychology, alongside “Alice in Wonderland,” and a mirror of the society we live in. Such a beautifully written analysis, where philosophy is interwoven with romanticized details. You are very talented! And thank you for this text.
Thank you! I pushed myself to try a different register with this piece and I’m glad it seems to have worked even with its imperfections.
I just hope that I interpreted your story correctly.
Absolutely! I did hope the story’s surreal, psychological, and absurd qualities would come through, and I’m glad you noticed the social and philosophical reflections as well.
I’m glad — 2026 can come now:))
Agreed! 🥂
This was a joy to read Marble!
Darkly funny, sharply observant, and unsettling in exactly the right way.
I loved how the humour never undercuts the stakes, and how “preservation” quietly becomes the most dangerous thing in the room.
The Archivist’s dilemma felt both absurd and uncomfortably familiar.
Really glad I’ve just subscribed — looking forward to spending more time in this world.
“Saved by ineptitude.”
Honestly? Iconic survival strategy.
Trip, flop, ruin the composition, live another day.
Everyone else chasing marble perfection while you go full human typo and win.
Ugly dancing as resistance feels correct and slightly illegal~ my favorite genre.
Never trusting a mirror again.